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Ponyo by jessieiii Ponyo by jessieiii
Some Ponyo fan art that I've been working on in my free time.

I really hope you like it. ^_^ I'm pretty darn proud of it but it would have been better if I drew it out first on paper like usual. Completely done on SAI, even rough sketched it there.
70 something layers later and we got the finished piece. :P

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So I am a bit pissed off.. I worked extremely hard on this picture, and a group denied it because they said it wasnt good.. :/ Ouch, feelings have been hurt. :P
Fixed a few lil details.
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Critique time~~ ;)

I'll Critique this one,
I Want to critique newer stuff because maybe i will just repeat a part that you've learned how to improve in.

Although i'm not a fan of Ponyo either xD

so lets start~

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Good things - i like your coloring a lot,And the line art,and how you did the scales on the fish,
the overall picture looks really nice.

Bad things - Well first thing I noticed,maybe because i'm looking at the deviation while writing this critique,

Is the ship,you colored it with so much white,
Did you tried to light(?) it?

- I suggest you color it with less white (example: Only one line of white in the red/blue barrier

Also the bubble,i think it should be more transparent

-I Think that you could of make the white transparent,making the ship look kind of the same behind the bubble,but with a little lighting

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:bulletyellow: Also,What is it on the Jellyfish's heads?
Is it like that in the movie too?

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Originality - Well,since this is fan art i can't critique on the design,but i like the overall picture and the overall picture looks pretty original ;p

So i will give you 3.5 stars

Technique - Your technique is great here,

I will give you 4 Stars.

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That's it~! Hope it helps you ;]
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123Lemonade Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist
dawww, ponyo is so cute! :iconasdfghplz:
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jessieiii Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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par1Div Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute. :aww:
Keep it up!
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jessieiii Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks and thanks for favouriting it as well. :D
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par1Div Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome! ^^
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